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Old 03-01-2009, 01:08 PM
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this one on top is the recent one i made..

i lost the copy of this old one underneath that's why i made a new one..
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please help me determine which one is better so i can correct my eyes and learn which one is the right tone for a picture..coz my eyes are oof, maybe coz i'm a newbie..hehe..thank you in advance..
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Old 03-01-2009, 01:28 PM
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The second one is pretty much it. The color, light and contrast are more pleasing.
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Old 03-01-2009, 01:34 PM
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I agree, I think the second one is much more pleasing.
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thanks guys..
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absolutely #2 is the right tone
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Another vote for Number 2, just far more pleasing in the eye, Number 1 is way too flat and dull.
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tOolbox, Welcome

With that amount of bright background, the girl is nearly overpowered. Consider darkening the background separately on a layer, then you can lighten her a little, so that your subject is now clear.

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Old 03-07-2009, 06:55 PM
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wow!! thanks jiminy..
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Old 03-07-2009, 07:49 PM
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tOolbox, You're most welcome

My pleasure (and good practice!). It's all about what kind of look you're going for. Your solutions are fine, I just saw that third one as favoring the little one.
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I still like your second one more cute face
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