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Well, Im a newbie, but I do see some things a little off here.
First, what do you use to edit your pics? Second, it all depends on the effect you are going for. If you take the photo in color and later convert it, you get a lot more tones, especially if you use a color filter effect on the software. It seems that those two shots are almost identical, I can't really see any change. But I do notice that the dog, being white, is really overexposed compared to the left (your right) side of your face. Really, you could edit that in post processing, using the burn tool to lower the exposure on the dog, and maybe highlight your face a little more. I like the composition, as I am kinda sick of the rules of thirds. Your head seems to be the main point of focus, and is the first thing I saw. If you were to darken your dog and shirt a little, you could get a lot more detail out of the shot.
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Thanks for your comments, dLambert and JFeinberg. I am using PS and slowly learning the ropes.
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But I will try JFeinberg's suggestion to darken it... Thanks!
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Oh sure, Jim. Please do. I bet I will learn from it.
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I don't think it is any better than yours but maybe it will give you some ideas. Make sure you click on the picture when it opens in the black background as it will give you the full size so that you can see the detail in the dog's hair.
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I don't know NX2, Jim. I use PS. But your conversion really brought out details on the dog very nicely. I noticed though that the right side of the man's face is kind of dark (maybe just my monitor?) Is there a way to bring out that part of the face? My skills in PS really $^*^%$.. LOL...
I appreciate you taking time to edit my pic, Jim...
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