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Old 05-26-2011, 10:27 AM
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Purely after critique on the composition of these shots. Which one grabs you the most and why? look forward to seeing what you all think & thanks in advance.
also sorry there is 3 shots instead of 2

The Pier Geelong #1
The Pier Geelong 1
The Pier Geelong #2
The Pier Geelong 2
The Pier Geelong #3
The Pier Geelong 3
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Old 05-27-2011, 09:54 AM
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I'm drawn more to number 2 - possibly because of the scale and being able to see a little more detail.
Number 1 is good as well, but I just find I am drawn up by the reflection of the yellow light of the water up to that pole, which is kind of odd - as opposed to the eyes drawing up to the building.
I think number 3 just looks like a building lit up and I tend to miss the water beneath (it could be a wet road etc it doesn't give the illusion of the expanse of water).
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Old 05-30-2011, 10:51 PM
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I like the first photo best. The orange light on the left, along with the colors and texture of the sky appeal to my eye. Maybe cropping a little from the bottom and straightening the horizon just a bit would help the composition a bit. I think you have several cropping/editiong options.

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