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Hi all, I posted this pic in landscape critic section, the general comment was around the sky, so I went to edit it and here they are before and after

Can you please critic editon?

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Old 05-02-2011, 07:15 PM
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Looking at the overall color of the water and the structures, I can tell the sky is not real as they both give different weather feeling (and overall color).

Maybe the sky should be a bit duller to reflect the right mood of the water.
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Thanks for your commets I try to correct it
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It's a heck of an improvement. I would try to lighten it up a bit to equalize the luminance and you missed a few details (see thru areas of bridge).
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It's a heck of an improvement. I would try to lighten it up a bit to equalize the luminance and you missed a few details (see thru areas of bridge).
agree, I'll work on this
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