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The color on the first is better and the pose on the second is better. That said, both have some issues with distraction in the shot. The car in the lower right of both shots needs to be gotten rid of. Problem with cropping it out is that it will leave no room on the right side of the picture between the edge of the photo and the exhaust. Also, I would have found a "cleaner" backdrop for the shot. Maybe, since it's a "Scrambler" it would have put them up in the rocks that are in the background and had just the grass as your backdrop.
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I like the first, the second looks a little over exposed which looks like less detail (or it could have been the flash)but from the brightness on his shoulders I would say exp.
I also like the detail in the rocks behind him in the first, just wasnt close enough to get that good blur going on in the second and to me looks a little distracting along with the car. JMO! Great shot though, I think he will really enjoy hanging it up in the house nomatter what you do to it.
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they are both good shots but with some distractions that can be edited since you are going to have it printed 8x10. the first thing is to level the image which is leaning to the right a bit. then you can remove the pole that is growing out of his head. clone out the car end and the rocks to have a cleaner look.
i attached a copy of what i did. hope you don't mind. i'll delete this after you have seen it.
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Cool ideas, thanks! I went ahead and played around with it a little bit and this is what I've come up with . . .
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I really like the top one. Looks much better without the car and the green pole. And blurring the background makes it less distracting.
The second one is cool, kinda like it was shot back when the bike was new. I'm not sure it works as well in B/W just because there doesn't seem to be enough contrast. Your dad kinda blends into the background. Kevin Veritas Imagery NW |
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I think the top one in the previous set is the best of all of them. The three immediately above are a bit too far on the background blurring, IMO.
The vintage toned image is also really cool, but since the bike has been restored (presumably) in the "now", I like the shot with the distractions edited out, a bit of burring and that's it. Shows the bike and your Dad quite effectively. Beautiful bike, he did a fantastic job! |
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