I need you critic please...

[Art]

Hi all, I did a pseudo HDR pic based on my original pic incresing / decreasing tones, later I did post production to HDR, can you please critic and choose one of them as the best?
Thanks Art

[scootermcq]

I hate to say this, but neither picture is a keeper for me. This is one of those situations where light was not your friend and it may have been too dark to salvage a picture. The first one the white balance is off, the second is too dark. In both, the lack of focus & motion blur destin them for the recycle bin.

If you put a gun to my head and said choose one, I would have to go for the second, but I sure would not want ot be showing clients either of them.

[zona5101]

I'm with Scott on this one. That first one would have been interesting if you had her in focus. I would then look at the man as motion blur and it would have works... but both out of focus doesn't work as well.

[Art]

Thanks Scott for your comments,
Art

[Art]

Thanks Bruce for your comments, as you and Scott say, it is blurred due to the situation I took it
In a theather, no flash, no tripod, just the light of the stage
Art