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I took this photo at "Ave of the Palms" in Treasure Island, San Francisco.

I upped the Vibrance and Saturation a bit and applied a GND filter effect from top left to the center of the street (in a 20 deg angle from the vertical) in LR. I also raised the Yellow and Orange Luminance a bit.

The original is attached.

My processed version is
Ave of the Palms

What to you think about
1) the composition
2) the processing... how would u do it?

Exif : 1/160s f/9.0 ISO100 18-55@36mm
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Hello guys!! Some feedback would be appreicated
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Sorry you haven't gotten any feedback, yet. I am a beginner so I will do my best to help! I love the composition, it isn't cluttered, but has more than one element in it, I think you did a good job processing it to bring out the colors. One thing to remember is not to over process, I think the way you have it right now is great. Hope that helps!
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