I went back to try again.....

[Art]

Hi all, after several months and based on your comments, I went again to take the same pic

Can you please critic compare with my original one?

Can you please critic composition by itself?

Thanks


My original one to compare is located in page 5 of my threads
Name : Art
Title : I have lost my opportunity
Date 02-22-2009, 10:36 PM

I have lost my opportunity.....



Actual EXIF

Exif Version=0221
Maker=Canon
Model=Canon EOS DIGITAL REBEL XS
Color Space=sRGB
Scene Capture Type=Standard
Exposure Mode=Auto Exposure
Shutter Speed Value=1/15 Second
Aperture Value=10.00
Flash=Off
ISO Speed Rating=ISO400

[wulf]

I've moved to the comparison critique area. Could you also post the original pic here please.

Thanks,

Wulf

[BigFuzzy]

http://digital-photography-school.co...0&pp=25&page=5
I went to page five, and the thread you mention is not there. You should post a link to the thread, or even better, the photo here. Otherwise, i doubt any will go digging through all your threads for it, I know I won't.

[Art]

Thanks Wulf, how can I do this?
Art

[Art]

I agree, I will try to put both together
Thanks Art

[lputman]

Art, this new one is a 100% improvement! Great work!

[sk66]

Much better!
And the change in season with the resulting change in vantage point seems much better as well.

[Art]

Thanks Lori, I Agree with you
This could be happen due to all DPS collegues and their suggestions / recomendations, including you
Art

[Art]

Agree SK66, I felt better since I was shooting several times with different parameters, this one was the best of the serial, Thanks for your comment.
Art

[kstiltne]

This shot is a million times better...way to take the advice given and put it to good use.