#1 (permalink)  
Old 03-14-2010, 09:51 PM
I'm new here!
 
Join Date: Mar 2010
Posts: 34
Default Locks of Cologne - how is better?

Hello,

I have this shot that is very dear to me and I was proud for not editing it a single bit. But everybody said that I should remove the left part of the picture, as the sky there is overexposed. What do you think?

1. Original version
From Semi selection



2. Cropped version

From Semi selection


Also, do you have any other suggestions regarding composition or other aspects?

And EXIF:

Camera Sony DSC-H3
Exposure time: 1/200
Aperture: f3.5
ISO 100
White balance: Sunny
__________________
Sony DSC-H3
Nikon D5000 AF-S NIKKOR 18-55 mm 1:3.5-5.6 G II ED; AF-S NIKKOR 55-200 mm 1:4-5.6 G ED VR

Last edited by Orpheuss; 03-14-2010 at 09:56 PM.
Reply With Quote
  #2 (permalink)  
Old 03-14-2010, 09:57 PM
matneym's Avatar
dPS Forum Member
 
Join Date: Apr 2008
Location: Troy Illinois (across the river from St. Louis)
Posts: 198
Default

I prefer the original. I like the atmosphere with the sun going down and light playing on the locks.
__________________
Canon EOS1000D
Canon EF 18-55 mm IS / Canon EF 28-135mm IS USM
Canon EF 50mm f/1.8 II / Tamron AF 75-300 mm

My flickr | Kingdom Of Madness
Reply With Quote
  #3 (permalink)  
Old 03-15-2010, 07:52 AM
dPS Forum Member
 
Join Date: Jan 2010
Location: //
Posts: 338
Default

Only copying matneym, but I like the original. The cropped version is too dull.... at least compared to the original.
Reply With Quote
  #4 (permalink)  
Old 03-15-2010, 02:54 PM
lputman's Avatar
Super Moderator
 
Join Date: Apr 2008
Location: Olive Branch, MS
Posts: 7,325
Default

Sometimes, it's ok to have a bit of over exposed portions. The original is fine!
__________________
Lori Putman flickr
~No one can drive us crazy unless we give them the keys
~~Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass, it's about learning to dance in the rain!
7D | 300L f/4 IS | 135L | 35L | 100/2.0 | 50/1.4
430 EX, 580 EX II Speedlites
Reply With Quote
  #5 (permalink)  
Old 03-16-2010, 06:48 AM
I'm new here!
 
Join Date: Mar 2010
Posts: 34
Default Thank you

Thank you all for your opinion, is exactly what I thought; I was kinda depressed when on another forum everybody told me to loose the sky, because I really liked it this way
. And it also has a "making story" that makes it special for me: my Sony was dead and I managed to start it again after half an hour for exactly the amount of time to take this picture

Thank you again. And if you think that I can improve something to the original, please tell me
__________________
Sony DSC-H3
Nikon D5000 AF-S NIKKOR 18-55 mm 1:3.5-5.6 G II ED; AF-S NIKKOR 55-200 mm 1:4-5.6 G ED VR
Reply With Quote
  #6 (permalink)  
Old 03-16-2010, 07:50 AM
I'm new here!
 
Join Date: Mar 2010
Posts: 1
Default Rules are made to be broken

That's why sometimes rules are made to be broken..
Reply With Quote
  #7 (permalink)  
Old 03-17-2010, 09:29 PM
I'm new here!
 
Join Date: Mar 2010
Posts: 4
Default

I prefer the original, I have no problems with the sky being blown out.

If you do crop it, try converting it to landscape, so that you can still tell that you are on the street. (attached cropped hopefully this is ok to do)
Attached Images
File Type: png Untitled.png (261.7 KB, 17 views)
Reply With Quote
  #8 (permalink)  
Old 03-18-2010, 12:08 PM
Jill H's Avatar
Stepping into the light
 
Join Date: Oct 2009
Location: Bunbury, Western Australia
Posts: 3,517
Default

I prefer the original too, as you can see where the golden light is coming from, and it gives an idea of the location in which the photo was taken so it tells something of the story - without it I think the photo looses this.
__________________
Stepping into the light - www.lifeimagesbyjill.blogspot.com/ - and - http://picasaweb.google.com/lifeimagesbyjill

Canon G11, Power Shot Pro1 (L series 28-300), Canon EOS 450D (Rebel XSi) (18-55 & 55-250), Canon EOS 330X (film) (28-90 & 90-300)
Reply With Quote
  #9 (permalink)  
Old 03-18-2010, 12:40 PM
LeeR's Avatar
Professional Wanderer
 
Join Date: Jan 2010
Location: Gainesville, Florida
Posts: 1,611
Default

Andy Warhol used to say "To a man with a hammer, everything looks like a nail." It seems that overexposure is one of the first things beginners learn to recognize and they point it out EVERY time they see it. Is it something we usually try to avoid? Certainly, but like every other rule in photography, there are times when it is perfectly appropriate. You have a wonderful shot you should be proud of; leave the way it is.
__________________
Lee R
http://lucentbydesign.blogspot.com//
The real voyage of discovery consists not in seeking new landscapes but in having new eyes.
-Marcel Proust
Reply With Quote
  #10 (permalink)  
Old 03-18-2010, 01:20 PM
SoxAddict's Avatar
dPS +1000 Club
 
Join Date: Aug 2009
Location: Boston, MA
Posts: 4,419
Default

I too prefer the original - the light really makes the shot. Never forget, though, that you get the final say on all your photos! Even if you were the only person who preferred your original, it's still yours, so you don't need to feel pressured to do anything to a shot.

Art is in the eye of the beholder, and we all see things differently and appreciate things for different reasons.
Reply With Quote
Reply

Bookmarks

Thread Tools
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is On
Trackbacks are On
Pingbacks are On
Refbacks are Off



Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.4
Copyright ©2000 - 2012, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.

What’s Your Preference?

Daily Digest

Each day we send out a quick email to thousands of DPS readers to notify them of updates. This email is just short excerpt of the first few lines of our latest post with a link if you want to read it all. You can unsubscribe from this this service at any time.

This service is provided by a third party (Feedburner) and you can subscribe to it by leaving your email address in the following field and confirming your subscription when you get an email asking you to do so.

Enter your email address for
Daily Updates:

Weekly Summary

For those wanting a weekly summary of what happens on this site this free email newsletter is probably your best option. It includes a summary of the tips posted to the site each week. This newsletter is subscribed to by over 25000 readers (many who also subscribe to the other options above) - come join the community!

To subscribe to this weekly newsletter simply add your email address to the following field and then follow the confirmation prompts. You will be able to unsubscribe at any time.

Enter your email address for
Free Weekly Newsletter:

 
SEO by vBSEO 3.3.0