Seagull - Two variations (Photoshop and Lightroom)

[jgomez65]

This is the original photo (it was taken in black and white)



The first version in the "out of bounds" effect in Photoshop



The second version, using Lightroom, I changed the photo around to give it this look



Coments are welcome

[constructivecriticism]

Love the thought behind the first one, yet not sure why you elected to have the bump in the shadow under the left wing, or any drop shadow on that side of the frame, for that matter. I would say expanding the area used from the orig might help prevent it looking too crammed. Also, top right corner does not look 90* (and I acknowledge your attempt at perspective, yet it looks pushed out too far to me)

The white vignette doesn't quite do it for me, yet I like the tint. Great work for Lightroom, though.

Keep at it!