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Old 07-14-2008, 10:01 PM
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took this for the wedding i did..


-used spot healing to remove double chin and fold in left arm
-used screen and dodge to decrease visibility of other line in neck
-removed bright spot on nose & chin (using spot healing)
-boosted saturation via low opacity overlay
-used sponge on cheeks & lips for more blush
-screen using light green & then sponge over flowers
-levels
-crop


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Old 07-15-2008, 10:10 PM
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You really fleshed out the colour! Great job. Perhaps the subject could be a tad brighter
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Old 07-16-2008, 01:05 AM
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hmm.. good point. i'll fiddle with it and see what i can do.
thanks for the kind words
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Old 07-17-2008, 10:10 PM
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Love what you have done I agree with SJH Foto - touch up the exposure just a little if you can.
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Old 07-17-2008, 10:14 PM
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I'd crop the left side and top more. And lighten overall, as others have said.
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