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Old 05-28-2008, 01:03 PM
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i tried a variation on my submission to this week's assignment.

any thoughts?

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Old 05-28-2008, 04:40 PM
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Ok, I am still very new with Post Processing. But If you could have just made your adjustments to the drink I like them. Made it really pop, but I would have left the remainder the way it was. Only adjust on the drinkg.
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i think just brightening or contrasting the first one would be better. you lost a lot of the good colors from the first one. My opinion.
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I like the second one. The drink is really standing out. But it is a little bit to grainy to me. I also think it needs a little straightening. The picture seems to lean somewhat to the right. But I like the idea of making the background less distracting by changing it to the sepia color.

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the table she was at was uneven.....if you look at the glass on the right, it's more "even". yeah, i added some grain texture to it. thank you all for you help!
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