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Old 02-01-2012, 01:47 AM
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MissVoodoo 01 by Chris Adval, on Flickr

version two in attachment and AFTER final... which you guys think is best?
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Old 02-01-2012, 01:54 AM
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Version 2 obviously has the corner frame thingy taken out; other than that, I see no difference.

The whites of her eyes look way over-brightened in both versions. Other than that, it's a lovely shot, Chris.
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Old 02-01-2012, 02:10 AM
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Version 2 obviously has the corner frame thingy taken out; other than that, I see no difference.

The whites of her eyes look way over-brightened in both versions. Other than that, it's a lovely shot, Chris.
the whites in her eyes wasn't touched as in brightness, just healing brush red veins out, and smoothed it out with the blur tool to give is much more cleaner white than before, but I did brighten the color in her eyes (just the color not the whites)
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Old 02-01-2012, 02:12 AM
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And I thought that was one of her kitty kat ears...
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Old 02-01-2012, 02:04 PM
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This is great! I love the lighting- not too much, not too little, great shadows! I really like the edgy look of your work- it's what I like to go for with portraits! I dont think her eyes are too bright and I think her skin is nice and natural looking
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