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Old 09-23-2011, 06:47 PM
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I have been playing around with my Photshop and I find myself strangely addicted.
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I watched a video on youtube on how to remove braces, this was the most time intensive and probably took 30 to 40 minutes, then I used the patch tool on the wrinkles, smoothed skin with gaussian blur (I alway overdo this step I think), did a high pass, flattened, dodged the eyes and added catch lights, fixed a couple of background issues with cloning, and then finally duplicated the layer put in screen mode at 75/50 and then overlay at 50/50. Took me about 2 hours, but it was fun.
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Old 09-23-2011, 07:36 PM
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I can see you did a lot of work! I think you chose good areas for enhancement but I think you over cooked it...in particular the catchlights and the skin. Your removal of the braces is well done. Nice work really - one of those time where perhaps "less is more".
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Old 09-26-2011, 01:24 AM
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Amazing work...
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Old 09-26-2011, 01:40 AM
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I like it looks great. Congrats on removing the braces. But I think you may have over done the features on her face, she's looks more like a doll than an actual person. Also her hair looks a little too over done as well, maybe not so light...it kind of takes away from the actual light and "natural" look over her hair.
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Old 10-02-2011, 12:17 PM
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How do you add catchlights???????
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