My Market Shoot...

[polizeirc]

Hi all, Im newbie here & just wanna share some picture i took yesterday.
In this picture i borrow my friend lenses but i forgot the detail.
Heres the picture :

- The Shoot



- The Final



I shoot the picture with canon 550D at 10 morning
i Use LR & PS for editing.
Thank you

[sedetweiler]

I like a what of what you did here with the desaturation and crop. However, the application of the texture is solid, but in a few places it is messing up a great image. Most notably over his arm and areas in that same corner of the image. If you mask out the texture there, I think you have a stellar image.

[yulchick]

I defenetly like the after version, looks great! good job

[polizeirc]

Originally Posted by sedetweiler

I like a what of what you did here with the desaturation and crop. However, the application of the texture is solid, but in a few places it is messing up a great image. Most notably over his arm and areas in that same corner of the image. If you mask out the texture there, I think you have a stellar image.

thanks for the advice. I tried to give the impression of a classic into the picture. indeed after I saw in the hands and the other corner was my mistake by not mask it more. ill try my best next time.
@yulchick : Thank you

[Canonball]

Originally Posted by polizeirc

Hi all, Im newbie here & just wanna share some picture i took yesterday.
In this picture i borrow my friend lenses but i forgot the detail.
Heres the picture :

- The Shoot



- The Final



I shoot the picture with canon 550D at 10 morning
i Use LR & PS for editing.
Thank you

I would've cropped the other way leaving the old board and part of the torn {above his head} tarpaulin in the frame, slimmed down to make a kind of panorama image,otherwise love the image

[ashleywilliams]

Love it! I am impressed!

[AnonymousKiwi1]

Nice. A picture that tells a story.
Aren't markets great places to find interesting shots?

[kingpatzer]

I think it's a great image to begin with, and I love what you did with it in photoshop. I'll second that the texture needs help though, as for me it is more of a distraction than a benefit.

[polizeirc]

Thanks all for the comment...

[happyme]

Really nice shot, even better editing. Take it to light room and increase a bit of yellow and orange in it.