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I like this photo and what you've done with it. The tone change really makes a difference.
I might have removed the rest of the bridge. It's a little distracting, as is the white fence. I think that what is looking a little odd with the light around the boat is that there is direct light under the boat and on top of the boat but shaded in between. Maybe the light should be contiguous. The boat is also not casting a shadow on the right side and the grass to right is shaded where maybe there should be bright light extending from the boat roof. All in all. very nice work! ![]() Al
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I really like the whole product. I actually like the changes in shade and light on the boat. The shadow work seems unimportant to me. There seems to be some issue just to the left of the house but otherwise the sky is great. Very nice.
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Thanks! I actually work on a laptop which is currently balanced on the arm of the sofa. Every time I flip my screen up and look at this picture it looks a different colour! Lol.
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You're definitely right about the light on/around the boat. I think I need to find some tutorials on how to use lighting effects correctly. Having looked at the large version of this, I've also noticed a bright blue splodge to the right of the boat in the water, which looks awful. (A bit of sky I didn't remove.) Thanks so much for your comment. |
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You're right....there's a blue area to the left of the house which isn't good. I may go back and try this again. Thanks for your kind comment
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