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You got on your horse and rode off in several directions--- architectural, selective colorization and reflections. Had you concentrated on any one of those, the photo may have had more impact. As an architectural shot, the building is too close cropped. As for colorization, the area is too small and lacks impact to justify the use of the technique. As a reflection, the reflection is overpowered by the mass of the building and the lack of a subject that grabs your attention. I think you have a good eye but just tried to pack too much into this one image.
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Maybe a good note for you: on 4, 5, and 6th look, it could be seen as a window wall, that entered from the outside, takes you . . . outside (the colorized bit). Concept OK, execution needs work.
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I have to agree that this selective colour thing is getting old. But then again its all been done so I mean where do you go from here? The best thing is to keep shooting and try different things. Everything comes back around =)
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I would have gone back a few steps and also tried not too include the branches on the right, they are distracting...Maybe you can clone them out?
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