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It might be a little to soft but I think you need to get some of the contrast back that you lost and correct the skin tone as well.
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as a women - I like the after shot because it makes her skin look flawless and younger than the first and who would'nt want that.
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I like the color on #2 but the skin looks much better on #1. I like more natural look though, hate make up and all that junk.
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No. 2 is a much more attractive shot - I think your image looks Photoshopped, so it's the kind of image that appears in magazines and things, but it's a good image all the same.
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The second looks better to me. You may end up with a better shot if you crop it from the top and leave just a bit above her head. The skin tones, in my opinion, seem fine. I also don't believe that it looks to photoshopped. But you can try dropping the opacity of your correction layer if you feel that it looks to fake.
Well done.
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robackja, Welcome
But, why not in Before and After? Or Post Processing? Or Photographing People? Critique is mainly for Critique of a person's single photograph, with a little editting. And it gets overflow traffic. Your title and first words are about B/A and edit work, not about how to take the photograph. You may even get better advice in the specific threads. DPS is multi-service; over-using Critique jams it up. Please, share the wealth with the other threads, too.
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