Meredith pose3

[kimspics]

here is a different pose- I like the pond grass in the background and the brown tones. On a scale of 1-10, what would you rate it ?

[peeperita]

1 to 10?.....that's a tough one....i'd love to offer comments on improvement instead....

she's a lovely woman.....your focus is crisp and your depth of field close to perfect...(although a little tighter would be nice)....

i do suggest having her head and shoulders fully in the frame.....her complexion is so fair that it contrasts greatly with the rest of the image and seems to be a bit overexposed.....you did well with her wearing a simple, unpatterned sweater but, maybe next time, she could wear a lighter color to cut down on the contrast to her skin.....and lastly, i am one that appreciates a model as lovely as this one to be looking into the lens especially when the perspective is high.....

nice work.....

peeper

[wulf]

Interesting hairstyle... no, wait, that's some of the grasses behind her head but they make it look like the back of her hair is sticking up!

Wulf

[Winning Post]

I agree, improvement suggestions are much more constructive. Although a tighter crop would have cut down on the over exposure I really like the very natural capture. DOF is great as well just blurring the reeds enough to make your model pop from the b/g.

Nice