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Old 01-04-2008, 04:11 AM
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I hope everyone had a good holiday and a happy New Year!

Here's my first photo for 2008. Please let me know your comments and suggestions.

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Old 01-04-2008, 06:40 AM
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This is my 1st attempt at critique - I like his face and expression but, for me, there is something not working with his arms. I especially like your female orangutang though.
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Old 01-04-2008, 02:07 PM
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Todd,

Good shot. Eye (photo right) could use a little lightening; catchlight detail is there, darkly. Showing paws would have been a bonus, still a good portrait.
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Old 01-04-2008, 05:11 PM
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Nice shot. I'd suggest perhaps....
  1. Zoom out a little bit. I don't know if this is a cropping, but I'd love to see just a LITTLE more of the rock above and to the left.
  2. Increase the contrast a bit with photoshop or whatnot. I think you might be able to make the picture POP a little more.
  3. Tweak the color balance a bit to green up the grass a little more.
Just a couple thoughts. Take it all with a grain of salt.
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Old 01-06-2008, 02:58 AM
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Summer/Jiminy/Paul,
Thank you for the feedback. I do a little work to see if improve this photo. Thank you for the suggestions.

Cheers,
Todd
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Old 01-06-2008, 03:57 AM
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this is one of the few times that i wouldn't suggest a thing to improve it...

very nice job, todd....

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