winter

[douglas]

I tried this in black and white but I think this is better????

[Sandie]

It might just be me, but there is a lot going on and I can't figure out where to focus my attention. I think choosing one tree or branch to focus on would be good. Somehow pulling the trees into distict shapes would help too.

[douglas]

I know what you mean, I wonder if this is better?

[Sandie]

It is a little better, but I am not sure you can really save this one. It is lacking a strong focal point.

[douglas]

Thanks Sandie,I think you are right...it looked so good in real life, but I,m learning even playing with it afterwards does not make a good picture!