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Old 01-02-2008, 10:51 AM
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This photo shows birds flting towards the plane as I took the picture

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Old 01-02-2008, 11:01 AM
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The photo seems nice at first sight.
The overall composition is quite nice, with distance haze making layers of background.
The flying thingummy could have been on a third intersection, to the left for example.
However I don't feel the aircraft is the main subject of the picture, but rather an unusual and intriguing -adorning in some way- element part of the landscape.

Nice pic overall.

EDIT : it could have been great if there were a close foreground element, like some tall grass strands, bush leaves or branches. But saying this, I'm not the type of thinking my foregrounds that much, and I lack this. New year's resolution : think my foreground
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Old 01-02-2008, 11:05 AM
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Interesting subject. The plane looks too small in the overall scene. Maybe a crop would help here to get more of plane in view and get you better creative subject placement. I would play with contrast too and make the colors more crisp.

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