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Old 01-02-2008, 03:05 PM
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Another photo with many views but no comments. You have a good eye for perspective. I find myself stopping along the way up to the large building on the right to see what has been deposited by the tides. This location has potential. Have you shot it in the early morning or just before sunset? Keep shooting!
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Old 01-02-2008, 08:29 PM
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Fusion08,

You saw that 9000+ Member total? And 1865 Active out of those? Maybe actual bells and whistles are called for. I'll claim that since doing over 300 posts since Christmas, I get some slack when passing on a photo. Yours I'm seeing for the first time and unsurprisingly has the same quality as last time. And it does create some curiousity and interest. Compared to others it's a gem.
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Old 01-02-2008, 08:37 PM
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I like a lot of things about this shot. I like the details, I like the subject, I like the colors, I like the bacis composition....The only thing that I think would make it stronger is to trim the top. My eye goes in and as soon as it hits the sky it floats all around, by trimming the top down to just barely above the roof and cloud line my eye is drawn back down to the boardwalk and then up again moving all around the picture. If you can go back, I would also suggest early morning or later afternoon for better colored light.
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