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Old 01-02-2008, 01:15 AM
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This may be the first cafeteria photo on DPS. Almost certain it's the most interesting. Good choice to make something so everyday look much more interesting. Some color enhancement might be fun to work on, perhaps less yellow. Good eye.
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Nice composition. a very eye pleasing shot
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I like this. Nicely laid out. I like the repetitive objects in this photo.
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Old 01-02-2008, 02:23 AM
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I like the way the silver lines move you through the photo. I also think the colors could 'pop' more. The light over all is a little flat. I would probably also trim the top to get rid of the distracting lights and ceiling. Really nice shot!
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Very nice composition, I agree with the others that the colors could be brought out a little more and the cropping of the top to eliminate the lights. The counter railings really make the picture very interesting.
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Awesome shot! Love the rings especially, they remind me of Saturn's rings.
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