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Old 12-30-2007, 01:11 PM
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misty sunrise
This one was taken last fall from the window of a bus, while heading home from a week of student exchange in Holland. Half asleep, looking out the window..it was an amazing sight
Done some cropping, adjusted color tones to emphasize on the transition from orange to blue sky.
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Old 12-30-2007, 01:23 PM
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vesitata,

You saved the best one for now, nice shot. Knowing it's from a bus makes it even better. Sun and horizon are positioned well on thirds, odd number of trees well spaced and composed (cut off all way round is good, like a frame), pleasant subtle mist left soft. No added frame - yayyy.

Use courtesy element, watch traffic pattern in list under "Critique;" if some people have added theirs since your last one, jump in. After a certain number, people may tire of your gems; they'll let you know.

I'm a fan of square composition for round subjects and diagonals, and now this sort of landscape, too. Well done.
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Old 12-30-2007, 05:36 PM
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Thanks for your kind words...I also thought a frame would only ruin the scene.
Glad to be amongst you.
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Old 12-30-2007, 05:42 PM
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Perfect for my eyes..reminds me of my childhood days..we used to go into fields every morning to play..and the view leading to those was nearly identical.

Thanks for bringing back the memories and a wonderfull share.
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hi,
you asked for a critisism so here it comes: l find it lovely!!!!


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