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Old 12-25-2007, 10:07 PM
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well....an early morning capture, before the actual sunrise....different sky combined with fog...the only thing visible was some high rise trees..the entire town was just lost in fog...

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critique please...suggest ways to improve ...not sure if longer exposures would have made this better...as the fog was setteled and non moving

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Old 12-26-2007, 01:01 AM
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I love the colours. Amazing. Not sure about the title..I cannot see any town
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Old 12-26-2007, 01:21 AM
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nice one! It looks really good. Maybe abit more contrast so you can see the town better?

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well....an early morning capture, before the actual sunrise....different sky combined with fog...the only thing visible was some high rise trees..the entire town was just lost in fog...

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critique please...suggest ways to improve ...not sure if longer exposures would have made this better...as the fog was setteled and non moving

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Old 12-26-2007, 07:33 AM
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suhail_dps,

Imagining the next few moments in this shot, did the Sun eventually begin to touch the edges of the trees and buildings? That could have been quite an image, small outlines in that wonderful sky color to show even more the size of the town. This photo is subtle, which I favor over more glaring sunrises.
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Thanks all for your replies, suggestions and appreciations.

jiminyClickit, the sun did come out as a beautiful sunrise but never had the sun lights giving the trees or town houses a littering effect.

The pic's of a following sunrise can be seen in my flickr, which are the two pics before the one you critiqued.
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