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Old 12-10-2007, 04:45 PM
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Quick snap I took, I shot it off access on purpose....

thoughts??
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Old 12-10-2007, 05:32 PM
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The composition is good, to me though I think the tilt makes the picture uneasy. To be honest, my eye's don't know where to go. Hope that helps!

Good thought though!
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Old 12-10-2007, 05:34 PM
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perhaps you can shed some light on the image.

1. What story are you trying to tell with this image? What are the people there doing?
2. Why did you chose to take the photograph off angle like this?
3. What apature , iso and shutter speed did you use to take this image?
4. Do you feel there is anything you could have improved on in this photo?

I find the image somewhat confusing as to what's going on it kind of looks like someone may be getting help with the bicycle in the image but I am unsure.

Did you shoot this in black and white? Do you have a color version?
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