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Old 12-06-2007, 08:45 AM
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I recently returned from a trip to China and took around 1500 pictures, of which I am sure at most 100 are worth saving. I am just getting back into photography and save for an underwater photography course I took this spring in Cozumel, I haven't been in a photography class for decades. I feel that I need some help in my composition. More to follow... Thanks for any suggestions!
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Old 12-06-2007, 01:23 PM
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I would have stopped the lens down a little in this shot the depth of field falls off before it reaches the boat I'm not sure about the building on the right have you tried cropping it out?
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the two biggest issues that i see are the building ont he right and the overexposed sky.
You could try cropping out the building and adding in a more interetsing sky. I might also try to boost up the colors of the boats to bring them out more.
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Old 12-06-2007, 11:57 PM
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I cropped the wall out and attached the resulting photo to this reply. I'm not sure what I can do about the sky. That day was really overcast and hazy (as were most of the days in China) and the sky really was that white. Any suggestions?
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