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NIce concept echo9er. I like the shot but think it could benefit from a few ore blades in focus....seems most of this shot is out of focus....which can work fine but this shot it seems the couple focused blades are not enough of a subject.....I think to have just a couple in focus maybe try and find a couple higher than all the rest and let the background have less blades out of focus and more contrasting colors.
i like the ice crystals on the tips....would love to see a real close up macro of those!
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I would tighten the crop to include the not-quite in-focus blade on the left as the left 3rd, and the partially in-focus blade on the right as the right 3rd. Then crop the top down a bit to just above the line of most of the the out-of-focus blades.
I think that should help carry the attention to the subject.
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Looks like a very cold shot. Try cropping it in portrait. Include the two main blades of grass. This might bring out the main focus a bit.
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Thanks for the comments/suggestions. I'll play around some and post a version 2 later.
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