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Nice mysterious type of portrait.....Not sure how I like the tinting? Was it intentional or lighting or post work? I think the eyes or should I say eye could be brought out a bit more .
I am no expert on portrait so maybe someone with more input will chime in....
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I like it! my only opinion is that it seems a bit too "bright" in the cleavage area.
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Just a personal preference, but I would be tempted to crop out the area below her chin and let her eyes become the main focus. I found that looking at the picture for the first time my eye initially drawn to her face, but was forced downward due to the light on her chest.
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In an editing application brighten the eyes and maybe a bit of sharpening...just to bring more focus to the eye. The one you can see is a bit dull in color.....
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I agree with Atlas88, crop the image to focus on her face a bit more. Her eye looks very enchanting, so you want to draw that out, not her chest. Great portrait though!!!
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