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Old 11-24-2007, 09:42 PM
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I was playing around with my camera while my friends were over with their 4 month old daughter. i tried to catch picture of her without her hand in front of her face but right before i snapped, she put her hand up to suck her thumb. it looks like she is waving her fist at me. I thought it came out good. what does everyone else think? Constructive criticism is welcome.

Take my picture again, and ill punch your lights out!
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Old 11-25-2007, 11:47 PM
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Hi. Shots of kids are hard to critique because they can be so cute. In this case, her little fist is covering too much of her face. Also there is a bit too much "black" area with no detail that does not add value to the shot. I realize it was a "grab" shot but I'd suggest working around the "thumb' from a different vantage point and use available light if possible instead of the onboard flash.
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