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Old 11-23-2007, 11:53 PM
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Yeah.. its the cracked floor at Tate Modern, London.

Tried to catch my best...pretty amazing the way it is .... Please suggests improvements / rectifications ... Thanks

Had to bump iso as it was pretty dark..played with some curves in gimp afterwards.

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Old 11-24-2007, 01:45 AM
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I am not good at the critique part, but I do think it is an amazing shot. Would you have a shot of the cracked floor (up further on your photo) of the Y section of the crack. That also looks interesting.
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Old 11-24-2007, 02:38 AM
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I like the way you took the photo. The angle is great. I imagine how it would like if you crop a little at the top, just where the cracked splits like a Y so you only have one cracked line. I think it will look as an abstract photo to or some kind of canyon. Nice photo!
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When I saw that I was like. At worlds end. It looks like the world is splitting in half. Nice.
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Reminds me of the 1965 film "The Crack in the World".
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Thanks too all of you who replied... well..have a couple of more shots of the same..but sadly have not found time to sit down and really work on them... will get them out asap...and yeah..indeed it was kinda wow...the way this cracked floor is
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I like the way you've given movement to the shot with the slight diagonal composition.
The only complaint I would have is there seems to be some reflections/shadows of a few people at the top, but it's really not that noticeable.
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The vertical shadows at the top to the photo should be rotated til they are parallel with the frame. Cool shot!
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