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Old 11-19-2007, 05:38 AM
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Nice subject, maybe a little under exposed.
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Old 11-19-2007, 06:36 AM
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For me its too dark
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Old 11-19-2007, 11:27 AM
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I agree with others, it is a bit dark and the wide angle has made is slanting.
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Old 11-20-2007, 04:50 PM
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rlarson,

Stunning building, clean lines. May be even better in a brighter daylight situation. If there is any tall stucture behind where you stood that you could shoot from, it would be a great way to get the verticals less slanted. With those little exceptions, you did very well.
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Old 11-20-2007, 05:03 PM
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A very nice photo considering the coverage of the entire structure. a bit dark as already mentioned. Some post processing might bring out the excellence in this pic.

Some suggestions
-A little bit of cropping from the left would make it a bit centered.
-The photo looks a little slanting may be because of the base of the structure, some straightening might fix it.
-Adjust the brightness/contrast
-The structure looks too sharp compared to the sky & clouds. May be masking the clouds and increasing the sharpness will make it more proportional

I am not sure about this one, but a little more grass might have added more life to the photo, bringing, the sky & grass in proportion, sandwiching the structure..

Please take it constructively.. Great pic...
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