Night Landscape I

[Lothegan]

Critique always Welcome!

[clockdoc]

Again, good eye for composition but you need a little more sky light in the image to provide some shadow detail and separation. You are on the right track. Keep shooting!

[Lothegan]

Thanks a lot! Means a lot for me your help!

[PerJr]

Doc is right - a little more sky would help...or maybe try to crop it so there isn't any "missing" sky?

just a suggestion

edit: oh..forgot to tell you that the picture got a great composition and in general is a great shot. Too bad i live in a city with 3000 people...i'll never get to take shots like this...so thanks for sharing

[Lothegan]

Thank you for your suggestion and for your comment, i live in Palermo an italian city! This is a photo of the little sea locality of my city

Sorry for my poor english..

[dande]

Hi Lothegan! I was just about to ask, where was it shot at. Very cool shot, I would really like to comment more on it, but I cannot find any problems with it. I like the curves very much!

[Lothegan]

Thank you dear!

I take my shoot only in my city: Palermo. A big city in the south of Italy! This is the sea locality of palermo: Mondello. A little locality!

[Olivier H]

I would not have put the horizon line in the middle but rather on the top third.
The picth black of the sky is nice to me, but you see too much of it with the horizon in the middle.
I like the colors.

[Lothegan]

The problem of this shoot is that i've take it without a tripod...i put my camera on a rock and take the shoot...This is the reason beacause the horizon is in the middle of the frame

Thanks for your comment and your suggestion