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Old 11-18-2007, 05:04 PM
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Please tell me what do you think about this shoot...Sorry for my poor english
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Old 11-18-2007, 05:09 PM
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the only things I would change are the whites of her eyes, trying to make them brighter more like the shirt, and her glove seems to be blending in with its shadow on the wall. other than that a very nice composition and good focus on a good subject
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Old 11-18-2007, 05:13 PM
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Thanks for your comment

Now...I don't know what is the tecnique for change the the whites of her eyes! Eh eh.. with photoshop i think!

Another thanks for your comment
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