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Old 11-18-2007, 03:15 AM
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And I'm trying to branch into portrait work.....but need equipment, dagnabbit.


Here is one of my first attempts, very little enhancement, I see room for much more. Please add your suggestions.


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Old 11-18-2007, 04:04 AM
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you got a blown out arm and underexposed face. There is a bit of motion blur in the hands which is ok since it conveys a feeling of action but you cut off the tip of the guitar head. There is also a bit of noise in the shadows. All in all I would delete and try again.
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Old 11-18-2007, 06:56 AM
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oh.... I don't know about deleting...these are the types of photographs
worth experiment with in photoshop...there are some neat effects and
lighting techniques in photshop that might make this shot interesting.
I think that if you like something about a photograph that needs too much
refinement...then use it to experiment with. You never know when the
experiments turn to creations.

enjoy
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Old 11-18-2007, 09:40 AM
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What equipment have you got? This one needs more sharpness - if I was there, I would be using my fastest lens (50mm f/1.8) probably wide open and then trying to get that gorgeous Parker Fly guitar in focus.

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