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[Dan(J+D)]

As I Messed up the first thread, here's a second with a little less time consuming picture viewing for you lol.

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there, I Hope it works

[Colm Noonan]

Hi there and welcome.
Nice shot, DOF and exposure are more than good, the only thing is, due to bandwidth restrictions with some members, you might not get too many replies. I'm new on DPS myself and found out the hardway. (NObody would critique my shots cause they were too big)
Longest side of image should not exceed 600px.

Enjoy.

[windrider86]

Love the reflections in the window, but the other buidling and that thin on the wall really need to go. Its too busy with them in. I might try cropping it in right at the brick line.

[wulf]

I think the bin on the wall is okay (a bit of variety as foreground interest compared to all the long perspective lines of the rest of the image) but that section is cluttered. The bench seems awkwardly cut off and there is something bottom and centre that would be best removed altogether.

I am also not quite sold on the angle of the building. I generally prefer shots where either verticals are vertical or where the angle is more pronounced so it is obviously a conscious choice and not just a sloppy photo.

Wulf