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Old 11-10-2007, 05:33 AM
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finally back in hawaii and can't put the camera down.here's one of a less known beach
haliewa beach
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Old 11-10-2007, 10:00 AM
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I like the picture but feel there is something missing in it like a focal point

I feel that when looking at the picture I want to see what is around to the right (following the cove) therefore there is too much of the trees on the left

I would have lowered my position on the beach an used the mound in the front or the wood on the left as a point of interest in the front of the shot

But there again I am new to this as well so could be talking rubbish
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Old 11-10-2007, 03:17 PM
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you did a great job with the exposure and focus, but there's something about the crop that bothers me.......i want to say that there's too much beach , but then i think the sand and it's interesting shadows are what you were looking at.....

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