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Old 11-10-2007, 01:16 AM
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Goodnight Lullaby

I took this shot one time before I went to sleep and I loved it. Thanx in advanced for all your help.
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Old 11-10-2007, 09:52 AM
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I like the idea of the picture but it is very dark so difficult to see the keyboards etc

try adjusting the brightness etc so mak it more "viewable"
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Old 11-10-2007, 01:13 PM
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Goat Boy, Welcome

More light would give a quicker read to photo. Watch out too for background clutter, can be distracting (wall electrical outlet, word "it" image).
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Old 11-10-2007, 01:37 PM
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I agree with the others in that it is hard to read. I took a look at some of your flickr images and see that you have a good eye for composition and creative talent. Keep shooting!
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Old 11-10-2007, 04:58 PM
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Thnx for all the help. Tonight I can redo the shot and have the camera just point the other way so there is no background clutter and I'll adjust the brightness and not make it so dark. I'll redo it tonight and post it up here.
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