portrait B&W

[necktru]

please critique my shot.

thanks

[windrider86]

My only qualm is heroutline appears to have a glow around it. Of course that is porbably from the lighting around it, but to me it doesnt look quite right.

[Drax]

Well done!!! I quite like this shoot. But i have to agree with windrider86 that light is distracting. may be you should try to fix it (PSP, Cloning).

[clockdoc]

What was your light source and where was it in relation to the model? Nice shadow detail. My only comment is that shooting 'up the nose' can tend to be unflattering.

[necktru]

Originally Posted by clockdoc

What was your light source and where was it in relation to the model? Nice shadow detail. My only comment is that shooting 'up the nose' can tend to be unflattering.

Ok, my light source is an open window in right side at 3:00pm, the background is the wall outside the window, and this is a candid shot, no pose in model, my friend was talking with other person.

[necktru]

This is another picture of the same sesion, here I turned around the model to capture more light, the sunlight was strong, I expose only over the face.