Tea house ceiling

[mambastic]

I took this inside a Japanese style tea house. I would like to get some c&c mainly on the composition. Thanks



EXIF
Tv Mode
ISO: 80
Aperture: f/8
Shutter Speed: 1/4"
Exposure Bias: -2
Post Processing: Resize from 3072x2304 to 640x480

[clockdoc]

I think you have a good eye for the abstract as well as composition in general. I like the use of the diagonal lines broken by the light at the 1/3 position. Nice tonal quality and color throughout.

[mambastic]

Thanks for the feedback as always, clockdoc. =)

[stevesutt89]

I like it, very abstract. To me, however i think that a bit of the top and and right hand side could be cropped off a little (mainly the top though). Although, i can think of a reason why i think it should be this way, so i really can't give any more description as to what i mean except that i think it may possibly would seem more balanced if a bit of the top and the right hand side were removed...

[mambastic]

@stevesutt89: Thanks for your feedback =) So, you would suggest cropping at the upper and lower right corners of the lamp? Or maybe halfway between the corners and the picture borders?