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Old 10-30-2007, 05:51 AM
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Old 10-30-2007, 05:58 AM
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Beautiful - love the silhouette of the trees. The only thing I'd change is to clone out whatever is making the bright spot or reflection near the bottom, about 2/3 from the left (under the 3rd tree from the left). I like the gradient of the sun's colors against the sky and then down to the horizon. Nice!!
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Old 10-30-2007, 03:17 PM
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Nice sillouette, but I would also remove some of the bottom of the pic. Those things (I can't tell what they are) are a bit distracting.
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Old 10-30-2007, 03:21 PM
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I would have cropped the bottom of the shot or pointed the camera up a little I would have taken about 5 steps to the right then moved the camera about 20 deg to the left. The tree that is cut off the left would be better if the whole tree was in the frame and the dead space at the right hand side of the image is unneeded you could create a nice diagonal leading line using the tree tops through the sun to the rest of the image.

Nice shot btw Just a small change in perspective is what I would do and crop the bottom a little not to much.
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