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Old 10-29-2007, 04:03 PM
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[IMG]Guardsmen[/IMG]

There were too many people around for me to get these guys faces.

But I got this one

[IMG]Guardsman II[/IMG]

And this one

[IMG]Bell House Guardsmen[/IMG]
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Old 10-29-2007, 04:38 PM
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I like the second one the best but I think that I tighter crop would be better... perhaps in portrait, with the guard one the left third and his eyes on the top left intersection of thirds. Anyway thats just my opinion... Great colors!!
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Old 10-29-2007, 05:16 PM
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It's best to keep the critique posts to a single photo as per the forum guidelines.

I don't know...the colors are nice but the framing just seems off on all the shots.

The first shot would have worked better if the procession framed all of the right and tapered to the left.

The second shot is the best of the lot. Again, more of the guard would have been nicer to look at. With the framing you have here, there's too much going on in the background.

Pretty much the same for the third shot as well.

Sorry if I'm coming off as harsh, but there is potential here. And remember, these are only my opinions!
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Lots going on with subjects and color. Concentrating on one person may have made for a stronger image.
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