Looking Away 1

[Drax]

Any remarks?

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[Murtasma]

I like it I think the exposer is done very well his face is all in focus and sharp the background is blured. The only room for improvment I see is getting the top of his head in the frame and less of the shoulders. If you moved your perspective up one inch I think it would be perfect. That way his eyes are kind of leading you up to the the blured area above his head to the left.

[Japaslavian]

I might clean up the white specks around his face and hair. Kind of looks like food crumbs. A kids gotta eat though right?
Otherwise I agree with Murtasma about the framing. Maybe even crop off the little block of blurry... whatever that is at the very bottom
But all in all, great focus and exposure. Great capture!

[Drax]

Hi,
Thx for letting me know your mind about "Looking away 1".
I also agree with you guys, one centimeter on the top and a half in minus at the bottom would have made a lot of difference.
The "the little block of blurry... whatever" is a part of the water system he was playing with in the playground. The "white specks" are grains of sand from the sand box.
Have you, guys, check out the other posts of the serie?

Looking Away 2
Looking Away 3