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Old 10-21-2007, 06:08 PM
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Hi Guys,

Just had a great day in a studio with a Pro Photographer and have loaded a pic here...

http://www.flickr.com/photos/12356261@N04/1676063424/

Will be adding more, but i like this one, comments welcome.


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Old 10-21-2007, 07:03 PM
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I like the idea and the lighting, just maybe cropped a bit too tightly. It seems a little compact, though that kinda seems like the initial concept too, so...
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I like this. I agree the crop seems a little tight left to right but the height is great. I love the tones and the texture on her skin. Lovely lighting. Good job
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Old 10-22-2007, 03:34 AM
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not really sure about the lighting or composition (cropping and positions).
they don't appear to be glamour type photos, nor is the lighting very appealing. if anything, the image you posted is the best out of the group, but is cropped way too close and is still kind of an uninteresting angle.
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Old 10-22-2007, 04:03 AM
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Interesting, but looking at the EXIF I'm a bit confused. D70s has a sync speed up to 1/500, but you shot at 1/60 and f/18. The pictures seem a little bit underexposed or something, I can't quite put my finger on it. I personally would've been shooting up around 1/160 and f/8.
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