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Hi and welcome to the group. Thank you for posting the EXIF data right under the photo and not having us hunt for it via links. Not bad for your first posting. The skin quality has a luminous appearance that doesn't look quite right on my monitor. Did you do some blurring or is this the result of your other post work? The photo held good tonal range otherwise even at ISO 1600. Nice background that provides separation and does not compete with the subject. You may want to try enhancing the catchlights with software to add a little more sparkle. I look forward to seeing more of your work.
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Hi and, as clockdoc said, welcome to DPS. I was looking through your other pictures and I think number 32 is such a captivating shot. You just have to wonder what she is thinking.
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Hello and welcome to DPS. For a first post this is pretty good. I would suggest cropping in even more on the face to really emphasize the subject. I mean you chopped off the top of her head anyways so why not use it to your advantage and get even closer on the other sides. Also what Clockdoc said about the catchlights. Her eyes seem a but lifeles.. enhancing the catchlights in them will fix that.
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Thanks everyone...still playing around and learning so much, always learning!
Clockdoc - I didn't do any blurring at all, only enhanced shadows a bit, I really liked the contrast it gave her hair. Not sure whether that would do it? Half the reason I started shooting at that time was the background , it was simply some stone pavers in the driveway of the cabin where we were staying :P Jay - Personally my favorite is 34 She just looks so cheeky! Glad you like them though. Thanks for looking ![]() Rex - Me and my partner just had a 'discussion' on the chopping off of heads. I have no issues doing it, especially if it enhances composition, but he hates it! I do agree about her eyes being a bit lifeless in this, and indeed the series that I took at the same time. Will have a go at more cropping. Anyway I'll have a play around and see what I can do, will repost once I do ![]() Thanks again everyone! Last edited by debambam; 10-20-2007 at 06:17 AM. |
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