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The DOF seems off to me in this photo. The bee does not seem to be in focus and I'm thinking that is what is supposed to be the subject of this shot. Maybe if you had a different angle to make the bee more pronounced. There also seems to be a lot of unfocused negative space. Maybe try cropping some of the bottom out. Just my thoughts, I'm in no way qualified for a critique but I thought I would give it a shot.
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It wasn't so dark at the time (around about 4PM), so I didn't need to use flash. I haven't got the knack of making it look any good yet either.. whenever I use flash on my photos, they always end up looking overexposed. Thanks. (: @shawngrimes: Yeah, it seemed a bit off to me too. But then again, the thing was moving around so much, it was hard to get it in focus properly. As soon as I took this photo (the second of two), it took off. The negative space was intentional in this one.. I've tried to take photos of bees and butterflies before and they always seemed too look more like a documentary shot. I just experimented with this one. Thanks for your input anyway. (: |
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