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I shot this off the highway in California on my last bike trip. I had to shoot in JPEG because I didnt have enough room to shoot a 1000 picture son the road in RAW.
I like the concept but it , i duno, just doesnt seem right but cant put my finger on it. Maybe not hazy enough with the little bit of haze that was there? Too much sky? Help
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Old 10-11-2007, 09:54 PM
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I like the haze. Cropping down most of the sky would accentuate it.
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Old 10-11-2007, 10:09 PM
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You are so right. This looks 10,000 times better. Sometimes it takes someone elses eye to tell you what is wrong. Thank you
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Yes If only I could be as objective with my own photography
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Sometimes its hard to take critissism(sp). I know I had a really hard time swallowing what others said about my pieces when i was so sure they were just so perfect. Then one day I sat back and thought, hmm well maybe an outside objective isnt so bad after all. They are seeing what I cant.
But if you hadnt said what you did about the sky, I probably would have left it alone, so again, I thank you from the bottom of my heart
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Beautiful capture. Looks like a post card.
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i was going to say the same as WooD. i do like the cropped version more. good job windrider.
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I like the cropped version too! I know what you are saying about taking criticism. I think it is a love /hate relationship!
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The cropped version is better. Very nice photo of what looks like a beautiful beach. Maybe center the title though.
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