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Old 10-03-2007, 04:19 AM
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phone booth5 I had to clone power lines out of this one and I cropped it a bit. Let me know what you think. Thanks for looking!
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Old 10-03-2007, 11:13 AM
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Val1064,

From the earlier view, I'd hoped you might pan right some to get the siren mounted on the front of the fire station, to signify location (and complete the right side). Unfortunate part of this view is that booth blends so well into sky. Is there a higher location from which to shoot nearby? Subject is ripe with possibilities.
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Old 10-03-2007, 12:52 PM
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My first thought is what am i supposed to be looking at? It lacks composition.
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You meant like this kind of? a I will keep trying different times of the day until I get the shot I like.
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it's weird there is a phone booth on top of a building, but the photo does nothing for me composition wise. it's uninteresting and looks like you just pointed the camera at it and took a picture.
while it may not be possible, an interesting composition would be on top of the roof with the phone booth in the foreground and the streets/whatever's on the ground in the background.
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while it may not be possible, an interesting composition would be on top of the roof with the phone booth in the foreground and the streets/whatever's on the ground in the background.
I am actually trying to get the Fire Cheif's approval to go up there and do this type of shot. He is off the next two days and it may take a bit of time to convience him but I am trying.
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