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This is the full beach series i mentioned in a previous post. I must apoligise about the slightly poor quality of some of them. They are all Printed and mounted, so i had to scan them in, and some of them didnt like it very much. Because im on holidays at the moment, and this isnt my regular computer, so i didnt have the originals with me. But i think they still convey the sense of the full series... Comments are welcome and appreciated

Beach 4

Beach 2

Beach 1

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Beach 5

beach 6
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Old 01-24-2007, 03:38 AM
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Context, now the waves have a place! Five angled, two level. Variety, too. Even scans show strong contrast. Is this b/w film?
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Old 01-24-2007, 05:32 AM
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You caught me, it was on b&w film... but i didnt know how people would react if this newbie just rolled in and posted a film series on a 'digital' forum... But I really wanted feedback for the series, i only got a credit mark for the subject, and it was our major assesment. And it was the first, fully printed and framed series i had done. So i wanted some Feedback on it, outside of my lecturer. sorry if i cheated with the film. But thanks for the encouragement...

Yeah i was trying to tell the story of the beach with these photos. the first photo is arriving, the photos in between show diferent aspects of the beach, palm tree's, waves, sunset, etc. and finnally, the leaving photo... so i was trying to build a story
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